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Abstract:

* For the second sentence, you should at least change: data -> data set and from -> of. I suggest something along the lines of: "We analyze the full data set collected by the CDF II detector at the Fermilab Tevatron, corresponding to 8.7fb-1 of ppbar collisions at sqrt(s) = 1.96 TeV."

Done

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*L18: in the same final state using 5.7fb-1 of data.

Done.

*L19: We applied -> It includes

Done

*L24: the full dataset is defined, and corresponds to something. Suggestion: "We use the full data set of ppbar collisions collected by the CDF II detector at the Fermilab Tevatron, corresponding to an integrated luminosity of 8.7fb-1 [11]."

Done

*L27: which accepted -> which accept

Done

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*L2: using THE secvtx algorithm

Done

*L15: of THE previous analysis

Done

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* L17: Suggest to put pull under parenthesis, and what is in parenthesis to become the subject. "Checks on the ratio of the mass residual to the measured uncertainty (pull) are performed accordingly." Actually having pull in parenthesis doesn't add much; I would remove it.

Done.